#1
changed first first verse, added another
changed chorus a little bit as well


Verse

Dark strips of leather
bind me to my fate
her wings lack white feathers,
this angels filled with hate
these black strips of leather...
tied down to the alter
she needs me
laid down on the alter
She weeps for me
my bloods on the alter.....


Chorus

wings of bone
on an angel cast down
beat alone, her black light is shown

wings of bone
on an angel cast out
sing alone, her false light is shown

Verse
Her way back is clear,
and her light is bright white
because my soul she chose to smite
and bestow her own false light
now i need a sacrifice
and you will have to pay the price
to make my way back clear
and bear my unholy light



Chorus

wings of bone
on an angel cast down
beat alone, my black light is shown

wings of bone
on an angel cast out
sing alone, my false light is shown


this is only my second piece, im new to writing lyrics so please let me know what you think
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