#1
the track is in my profile
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/metal105/
this is a track that the other guitarist and bass player wrote a while ago in another band. and we're gonna bring it back. my lead ideas are rough at this point in time but i would like some advice. as i sound too metallica-ish................
cheers dudes C4C i promise
#2
Quote by metal105
the track is in my profile
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/metal105/
this is a track that the other guitarist and bass player wrote a while ago in another band. and we're gonna bring it back. my lead ideas are rough at this point in time but i would like some advice. as i sound too metallica-ish................
cheers dudes C4C i promise

I'm not a pro on this sort of thing or anything, but I like the main riff, although the tone seems a lil bland... it didn't quite feel like it flowed well, i.e. nothing that you find your self instinctively bopping your head to, or tapping your foot. I think that the guitars would sound better if they had a better EQ setup, but thats just me.
#3
Quote by Chimpwn
I'm not a pro on this sort of thing or anything, but I like the main riff, although the tone seems a lil bland... it didn't quite feel like it flowed well, i.e. nothing that you find your self instinctively bopping your head to, or tapping your foot. I think that the guitars would sound better if they had a better EQ setup, but thats just me.


at the moment the layout and riffs aren't fully finished, though i think the guitar tones are pretty good imo.
#4
nice. its kind of shaky at times. but i got the idea. i say just keep working/grooving it. good things are bound to happen. good guitar tone. nice and phat. cethcy little tune. i like how it wasent 6 min long like allot of stuff on here. i actualy listend to the whole thing because of that. it needs a lift/chorus type thing, otherwise it just sounds too much of the same. but good stuff. potential like i said. keep grooving with this. its a start.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1256981
#5
Nice, I like it, it got my foot tapping after the main riff came in. Your timing gets off every now and then, but that's ok, dosent really take away from the feel of the song. The tone is pretty good, but I think the solo needs to be run center instead of to the right. Keep it up man!

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22865757#post22865757