wow man. i liked that. cethcy little tune. i love the guitar playing. good lyrics also. good message. i remember you from before i think, and this is the best. nice one man.

thanks for the crit.
The guitar is great, especially for the acoustic pop type deal your pushing here. The lyrics I think are a little bit...plain? Idk the acoustic pop genre is usually pretty full of either strong emotions or witty metaphors or something like that. Id say the lyrics are what needs the most work. Your voice however is very good. I like the end of the song a lot. one specific critique is when u say "different" i would recommend dragging out the syllables so it is "diff-er-ent". I think that would fit better rhythmically. All in all though, a good job...7/10