#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/xHellbound/music/all/play766481

I rewrote the intro solo today, first time playing it too, so it's a bit off. The first of the two main solos is a Hungarian Gypsy scale and the second is Spanish Gypsy. Feel free to laugh at my sweep failures, c4c, enjoy!

I play all guitar and bass, the drums are from Guitar Pro. Recorded and mixed with Reaper.
Last edited by xHellbound at Jan 8, 2010,
#2
Intro was ok, I dont know if the two really fit together, im not an expert so I dont know. At 1:17 though I found myself banging my head, I can dig that! Nice job bro!
#3
Quote by Pond Scum
Intro was ok, I dont know if the two really fit together, im not an expert so I dont know. At 1:17 though I found myself banging my head, I can dig that! Nice job bro!


Thanks for the comments. I'm gonna try to write a better intro solo, inspired from My Last Words (Megadeth) rather than Sign of the Southern Cross (Black Sabbath).
#4
Yeah, the intro was a bit rocky, the clean part was pretty nice, but when the distortion lead guitar came in it didn't sound like fit, sounded like it was off beat, your clean beat was fast, yet your lead was really slow, so in this situation it didn't quite work. But the rest of the song was beast, nice tone, nice progression, nice structure. I kinda wished it was a bit longer.
Good job.

Crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22865757#post22865757
#5
Yes this is much better than last time. It seems to be more tight and well arranged. The solos are also quite cool. My only gripe is that the drums seem really weak, and that your lead guitar soudn kinda like bends (you may need to bring your guitar to the shop for new strings and fret leveling etc......) Ending was pretty cool as well. C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1257583
#8
The leads are starving for reverb, especially in the intro. The riffs were good, but they're repeated a little too often. I think there's too much gain on the rythym also, it sounds great, it's just muddy. You're playing is really pentanonic, not sure if it fits the song properly, not exactly shred but your pretty good at soloing. One more thing, the leads are taking all the breathing room for the song, it would also be nice to get a decent drum program. This is a pretty good song with a good riff or two, could've been longer with more riffs though. Keep it up.

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1257187
Last edited by v2a2n2g2 at Jan 9, 2010,