Shit dude, when I saw the hair I thought it was going to be a metal acoustic track, but I'm blown away by what you played. Simply amazing song you've written here. The only thing I think you need to work on is your changing of progression, since it was a bit hesitant, and your tone, which sounded very hollow, I don't know if it was the mic, the guitar, or your strings, it almost sounded like a cheap guitar, but idk, I've never seen your type of guitar before so...

Bravo sir, I give you a 5/5 for excellent song writing skills and playing skills.

Crit mine?