#1
This is a departure from my normal style and I like the results. c4c!

narrow roads under mossy oaks
life felt so endless
floating on untied shoes and rusted spokes
as i sit here some years later

22 is still so young, they say
and i know life is very good for me
but my bike is gone and the oaks have fallen
and home is so far away
from here

cold thanksgiving week
sitting in forts, surrounded by trees
how brittle and crisp
pleasent and shapeless
was the brown leaf canvas
much like life was then

10 years ago this fall
we sat in a pizza hutt
after twenty-four hours of paintball
and it turns out we had to grow up after all

the palm trees rustle in the wind
crickets chirp
fish are splashing
and the colors aren't as bright as you may think
but i wouldn't trade this evening site for anything
because here i feel home
We're only strays.
#2
Dude those were amazing the only thing i didnt like was

"10 years ago this fall
we sat in a pizza hutt
after twenty-four hours of paintball
and it turns out we had to grow up after all"

mentioning a specific estaurant or game doesnt feel right to me more like

10 years ago this fall
we sat in that maple tree park
after hours of end on end playing
Turns out we had to grow up after all

just giving idea's but yeah those were really good