LessThanLuke
No.
Join date: Nov 2003
3,022 IQ
#2
That low Asus2 (measure 19) feels wrong. Switch it for an A Minor (change the second string from 2nd fret to 3rd).
JY-Rasputin
Probrem?
Join date: Apr 2009
179 IQ
#3
I liked it a lot. The 2nd part after the intro feels like too much maybe, too long anyway
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Kade2910
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2007
111 IQ
#4
Quote by JY-Rasputin
I liked it a lot. The 2nd part after the intro feels like too much maybe, too long anyway


Thanks! I see what you mean, i'll have a play around with it.

Please let me know if you want me to crit something of yours =)
GlenGuitar16
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2009
399 IQ
#5
Hey, i really liked it, the harmony at the start sounded good and i loved the build up.
erm, lets call it the bridge? that sounded pretty cool, thought it worked well.
i really cant criticize it tbh, but woulda sounded awesome with a solo, haha but thats just me, like the fade it outro worked well, really great piece! 7/10

crit mine? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1304117