benonbass1
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Join date: Oct 2008
1,717 IQ
#1
Hey again,

Here's another prog metal piece I've been working on for a while now.

I have plenty of sections, but they don't seem to fit together so well, and since I've got great advice from here in the past, I'm asking for your help once again

I'm not a drummer, or a guitarist really, and I'm sure my guitarist and drummer will much improve their parts when it comes to it, so feel free to comment on them but go easy on me haha

Really, it's the structure I need advice on, I've hit a bit of a wall.


Thanks in advance

Will C4C
Attachments:
PT.gp5
PT.mid
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Join date: Sep 2008
791 IQ
#4
Thanks for the crit.

I have to say this is pretty impressive. Very original. The song kept me on my toes the whole time, with all the tempo and time sig changes, very cool. I really liked it, good job.
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