brender
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Join date: Dec 2005
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#1
i just made this up so let me know what you think


Edit:here is an update
Attachments:
thrash type song.gp5
Last edited by brender at May 16, 2010,
windrider13
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Join date: Mar 2010
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#2
thrash indeed. sounded abit pantera to me if that's what you were goin for. especially loved when the eighth note riff begun. Sounded like "a mouth for war by pantera"I love that kind of thrash. reminded me of Exodus.

the solo really didn't do anything for me. needs work.

pretty standard riffage. but work on the solo
Tom Araya
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Join date: Oct 2008
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#3
I've checked up your stuff, I'd say - it's not bad, really sounds like Exodus mid-tempo. But - why it's so short? You definitely must to add some speedy riffs and one more solo. I'd give it 6/10. Stay true!
brender
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Join date: Dec 2005
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#4
thanks for the comment.its short because i'm still working on it :p
i plan on adding another solo to it as the main solo,the one i have in there now
is just a small on for the biggining.
wannabe_punk
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Join date: Sep 2004
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#5
i like the note combination, but i would adjust it just a little bit, like so
D--------------------------------
A-7\5---8-----5\4-------------3-3
E-5\3-0-6-0-0-3\2-0-0-0-0-0-0-1-1
and of course palm mute all the open e's
or maybe something like this, with inverted chords
D-7\5---------5\4\2--------------
A-7\5---8-----5\4\2-----------3-3
E-----0-6-0-0-------0-0-0-0-0-1-1
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Last edited by wannabe_punk at May 22, 2010,