#2
When I click the link I get a Seize the day solo cover.
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#3
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When I click the link I get a Seize the day solo cover.


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#4
Guitar part is alright, that just not my vocal style so since the vocals were the biggest part I wasn't too big on it.
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#5
Chord progression cool. The 16th note strums give it a cool feel. I think if you added another verse before you went into the first chorus it would make the chorus more powerful. You got a good melody that is catchy and good lyrics. Vocal was pitchy at times but nothing too major dude. It's a pretty solid song man. Good job.

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#6
This song is pretty good dude, the vocals really fit. In my opinion you should record a rock version of it because it seems like it would make a great punk-esque song. It's really great working, keep on making more stuff dude!

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