#1
Hey! I'm not very experienced in lyric writing yet but i've come up with this so far!

Embarresed myself by
breaking you like I got broken.
Repeating the story once more
but this time, i'm the one to blame.

Sleepless nights and endless days.
Shake it off and get on your feet.

The time has come, for you to climb.
Escape the abyss and try to find
happyness and bliss.
One last kiss.

Fastforward? I wish I could.
Believe me.
Don't want you to suffer.
Don't want to slow you down.

Sleepless nights and endless days.
Shake it off and get on your feet.

The time has come, for you to climb.
Escape the abyss and try to find
happyness and bliss.
One last kiss.

"STICK"

guitarsolo perhaps??


The time has come, for you to climb.
Escape the abyss and try to find
happyness and bliss.
#2
Hi.

Head on up to the announcement at the top of this forum. Please read the rules.
Particularly the parts about thread titles and posting frequency.

Also, you might want to crit or comment on other pieces, rather than just post your own.
You'll get more reads and opinions on your own work that way.

Welcome to S&L
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#3
Argh.. forgot to read the rules... I'll follow them from now on! I wanted crit so badly, so sorry.