#2
The bassline in the beggining feels like it should continue or something, i dunno, maybe shift it down an octave for the repeat?
Also the bass part at 41 shouldnt have too many open strings, it will make it muddy when played. Also you never palm mute on bass.

But thats enough about the bass (i think you can tell im a bass player :P)

Im impressed with the 3 part harmony in the intro and the fluff stuff backing the chorus(even though it should be a bit louder).
At bar 81 I think the 2nd guitar should carry on that riff that it had goin.

Pretty good song man.
6/10

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1315365
Last edited by corrda00 at May 19, 2010,