#1
*title tentative*
--words with brackets are also tentative --

I listen to alot of melodic death metal
(scar symmetry/amon amarth..also very inspired by nevermore)

Would enjoy any opinions. Constructive i hope!

**God Stamp**

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(Verse 1)
To you, father of mankind,
[the]grandfather of mine
I'm the illigitamate spawn,
bastard son of man and god

(Verse 2)
How [can] we live a coexisting life
engage in parallel wrongs and rights
day to day i suffer your same fate
without passage through empyreal gates


(chorus?)
I'm the empty vessel of you.
born of curiosity's game.
disposable in your mind
the embodiment of mankinds shame


(Verse 3)
When he dies his life goes on,
to live again in white beyond.
Upon me your chariot will not descend.
When i pass, it will be the end.

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Schecter Hellraiser 5 string
Ibanez SR-700
Genz Benz Shuttle 6.0-210T 600 Watt Lightweight Bass 2x10 Combo
Last edited by jlollis at May 18, 2010,
#3
Thank you!
Schecter Hellraiser 5 string
Ibanez SR-700
Genz Benz Shuttle 6.0-210T 600 Watt Lightweight Bass 2x10 Combo