Registered User
Join date: Jul 2009
399 IQ
Hey there, ive been working on this song for abit now
and was just about ready to give it up, but wanted to see if you guys think i should continue it on, or atleast just give me some nice feedback on it, or criticism to help make it better.
it isnt much, about 1 minute something long, im also unsure what to do after the ending, thinking about making a small drum fill and go into a upbeat chorus, any thoughts?

C4C if really needed

thanks in advance
I Fell -GP4.gp4
Join date: Nov 2009
313 IQ
The melody in measures 5-8 feels a little stale. Also, I'd advice you to always start the melody with the note that matches what key you're in. It just sounds a little more natural.

On the second verse, have the drums going through the whole song instead of following the Overdriven Lead Guitar. It was a little hard to find the melody.

The Rhythm Guitar and Clean Lead sounds well together and it's a simple yet effective chord progression.

You have a good start here, dude. Write a chorus (preferably a little upbeat) and continue from there.

I'd appreciate a C4C:

Good luck with the song!