#1
First time I have done this so here goes :

You turn up to a fronted building
Postulate in front of something gilded
Just like a sudo religon
Around its ugly core trace elements eminate
When Im there, I dont have a guide
On the right path to interpretation
I feel like the holy fool
When its liked a little to much by the public its all
Suspect Suspect Suspect......
The thrill of the spectacle
On which an industry is founded
It turned proffesional something once though deviant
Or was it just a Modern Con?
"You Shall Never Hear Surf Music Again"

Gear
Fender Telecaster with Dimarzio AirNorton/Tonezone - Coil split

Laney VC30 2X10
Orange Crush 15R
Boss DS-1
Boss SD-1
Zvex Fuzz Factory
Boss DD-7
Dunlop Crybaby
Carlsbro Phaser
#2
You turn up to a fronted building
Postulate in front of something gilded
Just like a sudo religon
(That’s the general feeling I always got)

Around its ugly core trace elements eminate
(Not sure what your saying here)

When Im there, I dont have a guide

On the right path to interpretation
( I like this)


I feel like the holy fool

When its liked a little to much by the public its all
Suspect Suspect Suspect......
(So true.)


The thrill of the spectacle
On which an industry is founded
(Again, very true)

It turned professional something once though deviant
(Is it “though” or is it “thought”?)

Or was it just a Modern Con?

I really liked the piece. I took for granted you were referring to modern religion in general. I think you should develop this, if not into a full song, then a longer poem.

C4C? This is my newest song.


PINO
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=24202804#post24202804
#3
I was trying to draw parralells between religon and modern art, also that was thought just a typo! Thanks for having a look gonna read yours now
"You Shall Never Hear Surf Music Again"

Gear
Fender Telecaster with Dimarzio AirNorton/Tonezone - Coil split

Laney VC30 2X10
Orange Crush 15R
Boss DS-1
Boss SD-1
Zvex Fuzz Factory
Boss DD-7
Dunlop Crybaby
Carlsbro Phaser