#1
i walked to close to the edge
and now im falling down
far below into the darkness
of myself

this life i live
has only one path
and i walk the path alone
living my life alone

where do i go from here
the lonelyness has come
creeping up on me
cant anyone hear me
now

this life i live
has only one path
and i walk the path alone
living my life alone

and im wondering why?
sitting here thinking how?
asking all these questions to
myself

cause this life i live
has only one path
and i walk the path alone
living my life alone

oh woah oh im living this life alone
living this life alone
im living this life a lone..
#2
The problem I have with this song is that you revealed the entire meaning of the song.

What to do?

The song is obviously exactly how you feel. To make this song “deep”, I believe you need to embed the meaning in metaphors and imagery. This will help with the reading of the song and capture the imagination and hearts of anyone listening. Don’t be afraid to shelve it and come back to it months later. I do that all the time and it usually makes for a more polished final product.

Well, this is all my opinion and you have every right to tell me to take a flying leap.

C4C?

PINO
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