Oh man, this is awesome. A lot like the songs I used to write. Your voice sounds delightfully smooth. Especially with the phrasing. Excellent. Just excellent. The mix is fantastic. I love how subtle the tambourine is. Mixing is great. What a lovely little song! Reminds me of Bright Eyes/Some of Ben Gibbard's stuff. There's nothing I can say I would change. Everything is spot on.

Here's some of my stuff. I'm requesting you crit at least one, and listen to the rest. I think you'll be interested, especially with all the subtleties I've packed into almost all of the songs.