#2
you have a good voice. one tip i can give is to not extend your neck out like you do sometimes when singing the higher parts. that puts unneeded pressure on your neck, and shoulders, and makes it 10x harder to sing. You can see the tension in your face. Singing should be easy, not hard.

i liked it a lot though, and i think you have a nice voice.

can you comment on mine?

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