Its pretty good! I like the drums a lot. But there's one bit where my ears protested, bar 71, that last note on the lead guitar feels really out of tune, maybe that's the oddness you had in mind, though. And another thing, you don't really have a chorus do you? This song for me really aired the need of a 8th note octave-over-chords part where the singer would do some long notes and scream out the chorus. Maybe that's an idea? Great song!

C4C? : ) https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1316717