#1
Chorus
is this what you want? (Misery)
is this what you need? (Agony)
Trying to escape from your sins
but don't try and hide,don't even run
because all these memories will haunt you down.

Verse 1
are you not satisfied with what you have?
injecting poison through your veins
Do you feel satisfied with what you take?
inside you leaving ugly stains

Chorus
is this what you want? (Misery)
is this what you need? (Agony)
Trying to escape from your sins
but don't try and hide,don't even run
because all these memories will haunt you down.

Verse 2
Can't you just stop pretending and let go?
Is this the road you want to take?
Don't you feel crucified?(poison through your veins)
inside you leaving ugly stains

Chorus
is this what you want? (Misery)
is this what you need? (Agony)
Trying to escape from your sins
but don't try and hide,don't even run
because all these memories will haunt you down.
#2
lol too much chorus and not enough symbolism man....
You can't pick up a meaning for this :P
Oh yea unless your looking for an emo song you need to add a positive perky bit at the end like 'but I realise now, what the truth really meant. You had a point'
etc. etc.
Not bad too much negativity :P Look at the structure of some BFMV or slipknot songs
#3
@DeadSoloist : Hey man thx for the advice!! ) and i am a fan of bullet and im trying so hard to make my songs sound like em =))))))))))))))))))
#4
Yeah, read the rules before you post. You can post ONE piece per day, 2 per 6 days and you have to follow the rules of correct titles.
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