#2
Umm. Well I was confounded by the whole thing and to be honest. I didn't get it.

The vocals were bad I thought. Not poorly recorded just bad. It seemed most the music to the song was just a simple drum piece. The one part I did kind of enjoy was the solo.
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#3
You're in need of a tuner.

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
#4
listening to it now... and I agree with ^^ you really need a tuner for that rhythm track... The vocals are alright... I mean not my cup of tea but I know he's trying to hit the notes so I can appreciate that. I do enjoy the overall shadowy theme of the music but I'm still kinda eh over it since you really do need to improve everything. I believe the Drum machine was the only thing that was tight and together, when you get to that part "shockwave" pick up the distorted guitar cause all I hear is just vocals and Drums.

overall, I think you gotta re-record everything. call it a mulligan.

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#5
I tried to tell them I am a terrible singer but NO!

OK, I am thankful for the comments once more, however, Silent Factor, which solo did you enjoy? The outro solo or the intro solo?

And what do you mean "In need of a tuner"?

Also, can you comment on my own song, Deus Ex Machina? It's in my profile.
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#6
It means that your guitar needs to be tuned. Using a guitar tuner would be the best way to make sure you're in tune.

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#7
Outro solo, much more than the intro
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