Starting a jazz funk rock kinda band, no luck with singers, thought id try it out myself. Let me know what you think and how i could possibly improve.

And for those who are curious, the lyrics are based on a true story bout a gal who hired a hitman to kill her husband. turned out the hitman was an undercover cop who staged a fake death for the guy so the gal went home to a crime scene with caution tape and shit, pretended to freak out and was then taken to the police station where her husband was waiting for her.

the man in blue
said you told him to
put a bullet thru my head
and stain the carpet red
what was i thinkin
when i said i loved you
you crazy bitch
youve got one helluvan attitude yeah