#1
This is my second attempt at a song, or more accurately just a group of riffs i've made up recently combined together. Tell me what you think and how i can improve it.
Attachments:
MySong2.gp5
#2
Hm...

Well first off, I'm going to say that the little acoustic thing in the beginning sounds a little off. I think if you made measure 4 into 4/4 instead of 7/8 it would sound better, because right now it sounds really goofy going into the repeat and into the next riff.

Overall, it's kind of boring to me. I think you did a really good job of making all your time signatures flow together for the most part, but it's just really blah. You've got some cool ideas going on, but I don't think that they're being used to their full potential.

Right now, I give it a 6.5/10, assuming it's not finished either.