#1
Just like to hear any good/bad points about this song i've just wrote. I'm planning on actually recording it properly at some point soon. I'm quite proud of it but not entirely sure about the guitar solo at the end.

Thoughts?
Attachments:
song.gp5
#ENTITLED
WENGER OUT!!!


lastfm
#3
Quote by the_hoodster
Didn't you post this a few minutes ago?


yeah, in the songwriting section, but realised it was the wrong place and so deleted it
#ENTITLED
WENGER OUT!!!


lastfm
#4
just heard, its okay but i felt it was too long considering that theres not much changes in the song other than the breakdown and the outro, I also think the the breakdown should be right after the extended chorus. Other than that well its not a type/genre of music i listen to alot but overall it was pretty decent, you could at some notes in the acoustic riffs in general, they seem lacking, something like this came up to mind
E E Q E E Q
E||-------------------------|
B||-------------------------|
G||--------7----------7----|
D||-----5-----5----5------|
A||--3-----------3-------0|
E||-------------------------|

you know? something that keeps the flow going,