#1
i wandered happily head in clouds
the sunshine cheers the pleaseing crowds

futures are agreable times
spent with good companys acclaim

spirits of winelike air assure
our eternity of endless gain


wordsworth a downer never!!!
#2
yes.

i like it.
if not for your diction...
then for the length.
it's refreshing to see something so short.
i look forward to more by you.
i am the lamb.
point me to the slaughter.