#1
Please tell me what you guys think, I would love to get some feedback from strangers.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LWmORoECY4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aWSjWfWjcT8
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1st grade up through 5th grade, the cool kids always sat in the back of the bus, so I never understood why Black people were so upset, I thought we were telling them they were cool.
#2
I thought it was all around pretty good, but I especially liked your guitar work.
#3
thanks!
Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
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Quote by ZanasCross
1st grade up through 5th grade, the cool kids always sat in the back of the bus, so I never understood why Black people were so upset, I thought we were telling them they were cool.
#4
Nice but your timing changes during the chorus. Overall, cool song.
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