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Verse 1:
It's a long, dark night,
With no end in sight.
Look Westward for a horizon line,
Find me a (rising) sun so bright.
To illuminate this
Pacific shore that I miss.

Tell me now, is this the darkest it gets?

Chorus:
And when the sun rises on the Pacific.
I know there won't be no more specifics.
And those exuberant rays,
Will erase my days,
That I knew pain,
That I knew sorrow.
But everything is all in vain.
There's no sunrise on the Pacific, no.

Verse 2:
Guilt ices over me now.
Frozen with mistakes, I make a vow,
To never infiltrate a wounded mind.
Why'd I have to crave you for mine?

Tell me now, is this as cold as it gets?

(Repeat Chorus)

Bridge:
I need a place where I can grow up a bit!
I need a place without a Pacific!
I need somebody to get me through this night!
Somebody to set my soul alight!
But there's no sunrise on the Pacific!
There's no sunrise on the Pacific!
So keep your broken soul well hidden,
If it gets wet it won't dry in the end.

Tell me now.
Oh just tell me now.

Third Chorus:
So keep your shattered dreams well hidden,
If they get wet they won't dry in the end.
Because there's no sunrise on the Pacific.
No sunrise to dry out the stains,
Left by my bleeding body.
Left by my broken soul.
And I know change will never be ready!
Because there's no sunrise on the Pacific, no!

Outro:
A-oh, A-oh (X4)
No Sunrise on the Pacific! (X3)
No Sunrise, No Sunrise on the Pacific, No!!
Last edited by baseballer02 at May 30, 2010,