#1
I think I'm getting over writers block, this is the first thing I've written in a while. I created this winter -


Through the iron clad halls
And to where snow never falls
There cannot be eternal frost
Without guide the fjords are lost

Internal pathway to redemption
I am the weaver of starwind skies
Some things could never end
Daylight breaks and we defend

The death of death, our plan to be
The blade of shadow has come for thee
Before Valhalla there is only war
Battle shadowed by the horsemen four

A shape you could not define
Weathered by the ravages of time
I created this winter
Within which you must wait
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
Quote by Bal_Sagoth

Through the iron clad halls
And to where snow never falls
There cannot be eternal frost
Without guide the fjords are lost
i like the wording... but;
the rhyming... just makes,
it seem silly to me. no offense...
especially since i rhyme alot of my,
stuff to

Internal pathway to redemption
I am the weaver of starwind skies +++
Some things could never end
Daylight breaks and we defend +++
i dig the second and last line.
especially the last line.

The death of death, our plan to be ++
The blade of shadow has come for thee -
Before Valhalla there is only war +
Battle shadowed by the horsemen four
i dig the first line. but didn't like,
the second. i just can't think of a good,
reason to use thee in this song.

A shape you could not define +
Weathered by the ravages of time +
I created this winter +
Within which you must wait++

i think it needs work. but i think it shows,
promise. keep up the writing.
i am the lamb.
point me to the slaughter.