#1
Not sure what style this is. is kinda like dance gavin dance or something.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/smokeysteve22/music/play843708

its not finished yet and is only still short. just want your OP. on what you think of the whole idea and the playing. ive been playing about 11months now i think.
i scream in it 2.
C4C aswell please comment. and let me know what you all think.

if your wondering on the lyrics.

there not that good and dont mean much but fit well with the music

(Shes)
scattered on the pavement
eyes laid closed
blood stained clothes
torn and twisted souls/
scattered on the pavement
eyes laid closed
blood stained clothes
distruptive portrait hoes/


not finished yet but thanks.
#3
Quote by Gu1tar_guy1010
Sounds early alexisonfire. i like it


Thanks. ill write a review on a song of yours. not sure which tho?
#4
Quote by smokeysteve22
Thanks. ill write a review on a song of yours. not sure which tho?

only if your want to..i mean i just left a one line comment. It wasnt to in depth or anything tho lol
#5
Quote by Gu1tar_guy1010
only if your want to..i mean i just left a one line comment. It wasnt to in depth or anything tho lol


haha true