#2
The song sounds nice man. =] If you could rerecord the song with tighter playing, I think it'd have the potential to sound AMAZING! Practice the riffs to a metronome, and record to a click track. Thanks for the comments on my composition by the way!!
#3
hey dude, just listened to your song and gotta say its pretty good though I hardly hear the funk. I'm used to hearing standard funk like bootsy so its kinda hard to rate anything else though aside from that it does sound like a great post hardcore song. I agree with Shawn that the song has great potential, at some points in the song there were either hesitation or just off time strumming. tighten it up and put up some damn vocals dude, maybe the vocals will bring everything together and give it that funky sound you claim.

in anycase C4C my song will ya?

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