The tone wasn't too bad. Overall, it was pretty damn good. The riff at 1:07 was kickass. 1:56 was really chuggy and sweet
Machine F**king Head \m/
Last edited by TechMetal at May 31, 2010,
Yeah, that was great...

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
This really needs drums. The riffing was decent but it got boring because there's no drums in there. Plain and simple fun death metal. It kind of reminded me of Grave for some reason.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1319104
Thanks for the crits guys! I'm working on getting a drumming program and implementing it, but I haven't been able to decide on what to get quite just yet.
Is this how to song will be built up? There's little texture and progression in it so far; it's just a bunch of different riffs played after each other. There's only one repetition of a riff, and it doesn't really fit in there. I won't comment on the lack of everything else than guitar, but the texture needs major improvement. Don't suddenly change riffs too often, it isn't much fun to listen to! There are some pretty neat death metal riffs there though, you should definitely use them!

May I recommend Superior Drummer 2?
I use it in all of my recordings, sounds excellent!


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Last edited by BlisteringDDj at Jun 3, 2010,