If you change the name of the song and clean up the guitar on the verses then you've got yourself a pretty decent song.
yeah, the name was a placeholder, i decided on Faults.
love the anti-christian sentiment
well, i really having nothing against christians, there are close minded people in every religion. christianity just happened to have the whole creationist thing.
Its strange to hear such an upbeat sound with lyrics like that, but I loved it. Good message, I especially loved the parts about the christians. It seems you may have been slightly off time on like one or two parts, but thats alot better than I would have done. I enjoyed your song and your message, good stuff