#1
Hey, im working on a solo project with my friend and both of us suck at writing lyrics. So were looking for someone who would like to write lyrics for us and we will sing. Im just looking for the basic metalcore lyrics, no concept album thing or fantasy type thing. Just lyrics about basic, everyday stuff like August Burns Red, Bullet for My Valentine, Atreyu...that sort of thing. And some instrumental demos are here: http://artists.ultimate-guitar.com/diamondsarentforever/

So, any takers?
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#3
I need practice writing lyrics, so I'm going to give this a go. I'll start writing lyrics for Above the Ashes, because I have ideas for vocal melodies already.

No promises though ;D

Edit: I don't have to do phrasing right? Since I wouldn't be able to explain it to you. I'll just write:

2 verse paragraphs
Chorus
2 verse paragraphs

KK

Edit 2: Tell me what you think, so far I've got:

Closed off in a world of pain
Living my open life with this shame
Lurking beneath is a storm of regret
Feeling guilt for things not done yet

Even in sleep I am without peace
Only waking for this liquid release
Something to force the memory to blur
Without it I can't live my life without her

-Chorus-
And this is how it ends
I force myself to pretend
I place my hands
To her neck
Day after day, love turns gray. Like the skin on a dying man.

I, feel

Cold as a razor blade
Tight as a tourniquet
Dry as a funeral drum


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Last edited by AstheticsOfHate at Jun 2, 2010,
#4
Quote by AstheticsOfHate
I need practice writing lyrics, so I'm going to give this a go. I'll start writing lyrics for Above the Ashes, because I have ideas for vocal melodies already.

No promises though ;D

Edit: I don't have to do phrasing right? Since I wouldn't be able to explain it to you. I'll just write:

2 verse paragraphs
Chorus
2 verse paragraphs

KK

Edit 2: Tell me what you think, so far I've got:

Closed off in a world of pain
Living my open life with this shame
Lurking beneath is a storm of regret
Feeling guilt for things not done yet

Even in sleep I am without peace
Only waking for this liquid release
Something to force the memory to blur
Without it I can't live my life without her

-Chorus-
And this is how it ends
I force myself to pretend
I place my hands
To her neck

Yeah dont worry about the phrasing I just need lyrics to sing. And so far that is awesome dude im really digging it. Oh and I forgot to mention try to stay away from cursing (not that your doing it or anything lol). And when your done just PM them to me. Doing great so far
My Gear:
PRS SE Custom 24 7 string
Schecter C-1 Custom
Jackson SLSMG
Line 6 POD HD500X

My SoundCloud