#4
Wait...You did listen to the right file right? Lol
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#5
That was incredible!! loved both solos, cant wait to see a recorded version!
#6
does anyone else get an error message when they switch tracks?
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#7
This was actually quite good. Although, the beginning got of to a strange start rhythm wise. It was quite a good post-hardcore song (at least i think that's what you went for), And this is coming from a guy who damn near hates post-hardcore. Ireally enjoy your style when it comes to solos and leads. You kept it simple but didn't descend into straight pentatonic crap. 8.5/10 from me.

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#8
It won't let me click your link dude, it keeps downloading my rick roll
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#9
Don't have time to give a full crit right now, will edit one in later. But the things that struck me were:

- The solos were really good. Great phrasing.
- There were some cool riffs in there, especially the chorus.
- You have a "radio intro", then almost no vocals for the rest of the song. Does not compute.

8/10 - More vocals!
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#10
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Don't have time to give a full crit right now, will edit one in later. But the things that struck me were:

- The solos were really good. Great phrasing.
- There were some cool riffs in there, especially the chorus.
- You have a "radio intro", then almost no vocals for the rest of the song. Does not compute.

8/10 - More vocals!

I didn't finish tabbing the vocals...Mainly cuz I didn't finish writing them yet... lol. I'm lazy bro... Thanks for an honest crit.
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#11
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I didn't finish tabbing the vocals...Mainly cuz I didn't finish writing them yet... lol. I'm lazy bro... Thanks for an honest crit.

Ah fair enough then haha

It's good though, with vocals it'll be at least a 9 I reckon
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