#2
The drums are a little overpowering at first. The change to the second riff from the first doesn't really flow. It almost seems like a different style. The first riff gives me a happy/punky vibe and the rest of the song is metal and dark. The first lead part is pretty interesting. Some of the playing is a little sloppy though. You have some good ideas, I think you just need to organize them better.

Could you C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1315058