#2
honestly, not that much repetition
a couple minor suggestions for the drums:
use something other than bass drum for the "holy shi-" section...i like hi-hat pedal (#44)
in the "celebration times" section, double up the hi-hat hits
in the "i caught.." section, less bass drum..use some toms or cymbals to mix it up...or even more snare. you can have snare on more than one beat in a measure
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#3
Dude, that was sweet.

I agree in some parts there might be too much bass drum.
But... actually, if that's the way you want it to sound, it isn't THAT bad.

I can't wait for the vocals.