#1
I wrote this yesterday and recorded the first draft today! There is one guitar missing at the end of the song because I actually have to practice the missing bit (so freakin' haaaard!).

Heavily inspired by Meshuggah! Polyrhythmics all the way, up to 4 different time measures at the same time (hard to notice without actually looking at the score). I quite like it myself and I'm happy with what I've got so far!

Feedback is highly appreciated!

Questions are very much welcome! (:


The song (Concussion) is in my profile, or you could listen to it at last.fm: http://www.last.fm/music/Daniel+D.+Johansen/_/Concussion

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/BlisteringDDj/

Hope you like it, and please check out my other original recordings as well! : D
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Last edited by BlisteringDDj at Jun 2, 2010,
#2
Well, i liked it
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#3
Dude, freaking epic. Definitely Meshuggah-influenced at times, but then some really original math metal stuff too. Great mix of the riffs and electronic sounds. Great drums for the feel of the song. Rock on!
#4
Meshuggah/Gojira all the way man!
this song is completely moshworthy.
i love the quality of it all and its mixed together so well.
i kind of wish the guitar was just a little bit louder tho.
drums fit well. well thought out riffs. i wish i could play this type of shit as good
overall the song was a 9/10 for me. completely awesome
#5
Thanks!

I could try turning up the volume on the guitars, but I don't want it to drown the kick drum. I'm quite happy with the volume as it is, really. ^____^
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#6
i really liked it
got a real nice fat tone, plenty of beef in there :p

guitars could be a bit louder though maybe?

can tell its mesuggah influenced?

good riffs and drums to fit too, played well too (Y)

got some sick ideas in this track

1:50 is ****ing <3 haha :p
loved that shit!

but yeah man, well done on this

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#7
Thanks! As I've said earlier, I could try turning the guitars up a bit. I'll check out yours! (:
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#8
Very catchy, enjoyed it a lot. It got a slight bit repetative (sic) due to all the 0-0-0-0-0-0-000-0-1.
#9
Gotta love a bit of math metal , its got a brilliant structure to it and the odd time was actually very catchy, very headbangable. I guess you don't need me to say that the guitars could do with turning up, but only a tad.

Not much else to say, you can check out my stuff on my profile and crit if you want

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/ascendancy2/
#11
Thanks!

Left you a comment, ascendancy2. (:

@Mehtabb: It is a little repetative in the mid section, I'm aware of that myself. I'm considering adding vocals to it all though, or maybe just keep it as an instrumental and add some weird, spacey solo in that part? You can't hear it but it's more like: 0000-1111-2222-3333-0000-0000-0000. :,D There's a weird structure to that as well, can't be bothered to explain. I should tweak the tone a bit so it can be heard, lol.
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