hey guys

some of you remember at my last thread? there I asked for crit for my new song, cause i want to know, if i go on with it.

But now one give a request :/

so i went on tapping the sing and now it finished.

Please give some comments or crit
And play it with rse on ;D


(P.S.: The text is above the vocal-track)

(P.p.S.: and C4C of course ;D)
I want to find you.gp5
Pretty generic, but I guess that's pop punk...
And it's also pretty obvious you're not speaking English very well...
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