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The acoustic guitar sounds good. The distorted ones sound really thin. I think this song would improve if you built it up more. Right now, it builds and then it drops and then it builds and it drops. I think if you added another section it would improve.
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It would definitely improve the sound with some percussion/bass to thicken it up. I am not huge fan of that first chord either on the lower strings.