#1
Hey guys these are the first lyrics i've posted here, and i havent given crit before sorry, but i'll do my best!


Every time we fall
we get back up
just to fight again

Everything I am
is everything you've made of me
consequence alive
At the core I am more
than just a body for
you to place the blame
PUT THE BLAME ON ME
PUT THE BLAME ON ME

Look at me
look at what you made
all the damage you have done
all the feelings you have wrecked

like your angels broken wings

I cant mend what I didnt break
its all up to you now
all up to you
What we've come to
all in all its something else
something new to me
something bittersweet
I cant fix what was never mine
I cant mend your
your angels broken wings---

Thus far my only only real complaint
is that I didnt see this coming
now its too late
No more hiding behind panes of glass
we're just falling way to fast
just take it
TAKE THIS PAIN FROM ME
TAKE THIS PAIN FROM ME

Look at you
look at who you've become
savage raging cynic
never stopped to think

about your angels broken wings

I cant mend what I didnt break
its all up to you now
all up to you
What we've come to
all in all its something else
something new to me
something bittersweet
I cant fix what was never mine
I cant mend your
your angels broken wings---

yelling(God help me
what have we to deserve this
what the f*ck have we all done
that makes us the scum
the sh*t on society's shoe
You know what f*ck you
f*ck you------)

and your angels broken wings

I cant mend what I didnt break
(broken wings)
its all up to you now
(all up to you)
all up to you

What we've come to
(what we are)
all in all its something else
something new to me
(something new)
something bittersweet
( bittersweet now)
I cant fix what was never mine
I cant mend your
I cant mend your
I cant mend
your angels broken wings---
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#2
It sounds cool, but would be easier to critique if it was with music. What type of song will this be?
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