#1
Okay, so I only have the chorus, but I'd liek to know how it's sounding as of where I'm at right now. Any input would be helpful, thanks.

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You lie to me once

Then you push me away

I can see now that I've lost my strength


I laid it all out

All out for you

I can see now that the good days are through


I'm taking it back

Back from the grave

Pushing now only to forget your name


It's too late to try

Try to save me

I got my chance and now I'm runnin' free
You've gotta be who you are,
and don't be what you're not.
If you want to be of the world,
then you can't be of God.
#2
This seems like it'd be a really good chorus. It's to the point but it feels big at the same time and not simple. Use it!

Btw I really agree with your lyrics quote on the bottom of your post. I agree with you, atheists should leave it be.
#3
Quote by thePTOD
This seems like it'd be a really good chorus. It's to the point but it feels big at the same time and not simple. Use it!

Btw I really agree with your lyrics quote on the bottom of your post. I agree with you, atheists should leave it be.



Thanks for the input

And yeah... Atheists need to just leave it be...
If you want the rest of it the song is "Indivisible" by Pillar
You've gotta be who you are,
and don't be what you're not.
If you want to be of the world,
then you can't be of God.