#1
This okay is.. alright I suppose. I had a couple timing issues and missed a couple notes at the hard parts. This solo is okay but I missed a couple pinched harmonics. Also, I missed the last note, which should be a G, but my dumbass fingers went to G#. Damn.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ye6o1ug6ktE

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Last edited by larrytheguitar at Jun 14, 2010,
#2
Well, other than the poor quality, I can't really find much fault with it, although I'd have tried to downpick more stuff. The intro sounded a little sloppy, but that might have been the audio quality.
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#3
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Well, other than the poor quality, I can't really find much fault with it, although I'd have tried to downpick more stuff. The intro sounded a little sloppy, but that might have been the audio quality.


Yeah, I usually downpick but for the sake of the video I decided to play it safe.
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#4
Hi,
thanks for your comment on my cover of the night.

Your cover is good. Just try to work a little bit more the intro (sounds sloppy), and try to improve a bit your timing too (at some times it's not exactly in time). As for the solo, it's pretty good (except for the pinches harmonics).

But it's a hard song to play, so you did a good job !

Keep on!
#5
Sound quality wasn't the greatest but the playing was pretty good and solid. Nothing really that I noticed bad, a mistake or two but barely noticable. I a few timing hiccups but nothing that stuck out bad. Just need to smoothen things out a bit to get some better tone. But overall the tone wasnt bad, just could be better. Good cover dude and keep it up. The harmonics you did hit where pretty good.

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#6
Sounds like you need to go back to basics with the intro lick, start slow with a metronome then build up speed. Everything else was good, keep up the progress!
#7
^ Yeah I got it down now. My picking was very sloppy; I was just kinda going up and down on those two strings, I'm being a lot more precise now. Thanks for the input man!
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#8
Nice.
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#9
^ Thank you, thank you.
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#10
I reckon it was really good, this is one of my favourite songs to play

A few little hiccups in there, like some timing spots and missed notes, but other than that it was killer!
#11
^ Thanks a lot, man.
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