#1
Just wrote this song up. It's about being simply interested in someone, and nothing more.

what a way to end
something that never began
i'll keep out the details
but i'll tell about the fantasy i lived in

you were more than just another girl
i was more than a guy that needed
his insecurities to be reassured
and it actually lasted

then we started something meaningful
it was always new and bright, it was never dull
i was something you'd never known
you were something i actually found worthwhile

but as soon as it began, it ended
within a blink of an eye it was different
i could see what i always knew would be
you were just another girl

and i was only me
We're only strays.
#2
I like it. When I'm reading it, I'm imagining a guy spying a cute girl from across the bar. I feel like he either didn't build up the courage to talk to her, or he turned around for a oment and when he looked back, she was gone. I enjoyed it. I think it'd be a good acoustic song. Props!

C4C?
"Come Find Me"
"This nightmare's gonna break me.
Please, Daylight, save me..."
#3
Quote by DaysofGrace
I like it. When I'm reading it, I'm imagining a guy spying a cute girl from across the bar. I feel like he either didn't build up the courage to talk to her, or he turned around for a moment and when he looked back, she was gone. I enjoyed it. I think it'd be a good acoustic song. Props!

C4C?
"Come Find Me"


This bastard stole my entire crit =) I agree with everything he said wholeheartedly. very simple, but not in the complacent sense, uk? Good work! keep it up!
Too lazy to come up with a clever or relevant sig.
#4
"Bastard"...? That's not very nice... =P
"This nightmare's gonna break me.
Please, Daylight, save me..."