#1
As smoke rings swirl
silently around distant stars
in a solemn salute
to everlasting solidarity...
I'm sleepless -
waiting for the rising sun
to surface its summer smile and
shed light upon an unseeing society
of restless souls addicted
to their constitutional pursuit
of sinful happiness...
#2
Wow.. that was..really good (: It's a very simple idea for a poem I'd say, but you described it beautifully. Nice job! Do you plan on just keeping it like that, or are you gonna add to it to make a song or what? Cuz i think it'd be awesome if you made something like this, into some lyrics. Like an Avenged Sevenfold kinda thing.

Anyways, very nice job. I love poetic stuff, so (:

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