As smoke rings swirl
silently around distant stars
in a solemn salute
to everlasting solidarity...
I'm sleepless -
waiting for the rising sun
to surface its summer smile and
shed light upon an unseeing society
of restless souls addicted
to their constitutional pursuit
of sinful happiness...
Wow.. that was..really good (: It's a very simple idea for a poem I'd say, but you described it beautifully. Nice job! Do you plan on just keeping it like that, or are you gonna add to it to make a song or what? Cuz i think it'd be awesome if you made something like this, into some lyrics. Like an Avenged Sevenfold kinda thing.

Anyways, very nice job. I love poetic stuff, so (:


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