#1
i don't have a room
i only got four walls
reminded everyday
to obey the laws

this is the last straw
it isn't funny at all
how many times
have i told you
stay out of
stay out of my room

this is the last straw
it isn't funny at all
how many times
have i told you
stay out of
stay out of

bored out of my mind
somehow i got left behind
how many times
have i told you
stay out of
stay out of my room
#3
Nice song dude. I dont know about the bored out of my mind line though.
#4
I like the first part

"i don't have a room
i only got four walls
reminded everyday
to obey the laws"


and i kinda like this part:

"this is the last straw
it isn't funny at all
how many times
have i told you
stay out of
stay out of my room"


It's kinda like a psyco lyrical thing. And I think you should work on it cuz it could be a really epic piece. Are you gonna create some instrumental to this, or? If so, what type? (:

C4C?

"The Inner Atributes"

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1320793
Last edited by Maddita at Jun 7, 2010,