#2
Great song. It reminds me of Nothing Else Matters, Metallica.
#3
If you ask me, it's a little too Metallica-esque. However, considering your age and how long you've been playing, it isn't bad at all. I would extend it, and expand on it more, and put a solo over it.

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#4
I think the first thing that needs to be done is work on timing. I could see the potential, but the sloppy playing and off timing ruined it for me =\
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