I was messing around with some chords, and came up with this. Im not much of a signer, so the vocals are not the best . Its kinda on the short side, cause I dont write lyrics that much.

some criticism would be greatly appreciated!


Oh its also in my profile if you dont want to download it. It's called Waitin.
Interesting progression you made there; definitely a nice change from the usual I-V-iv-IV you usually hear. The vocals definitely could use more work, but apart from that this is a nice song. Its soft sound makes the listener feel a sense of comfort and relaxation- something everyone likes to feel. Keep up the good work!