#1
I was messing around with some chords, and came up with this. Im not much of a signer, so the vocals are not the best . Its kinda on the short side, cause I dont write lyrics that much.

some criticism would be greatly appreciated!

http://www.mediafire.com/?jdn2mvtflyj

Oh its also in my profile if you dont want to download it. It's called Waitin.
#2
Interesting progression you made there; definitely a nice change from the usual I-V-iv-IV you usually hear. The vocals definitely could use more work, but apart from that this is a nice song. Its soft sound makes the listener feel a sense of comfort and relaxation- something everyone likes to feel. Keep up the good work!