#1
All screamed ^^ c4c

(Verse)
Everyday I wake up
and I'm forced
to put on my facade

Pretending to be happy
for you
always you

You use your dirty hands
to mold me
into what you want me to be

There's no freedom
no conscious
no salvation

(Pre-chorus)
You hide the devil
the demons
that feed through you

When the cup
touches your lips
you metamorphasize

(Chorus)
Hit the floor
as you call me a piece of shit
I'm so worthless
I don't deserve the skin I'm in

Whipped again
your anger released on me
But I take it so you'll finally
fall asleep

(Verse 2)
Everynight I fall asleep (I don't like using fall asleep here. Any suggestions on what to change it to?)
and I'm scared
of all these damned dreams

Trying to forget
for you
always you

Your face is silhouetted
against
the blood red moon

There's no freedom
no conscious
no salvation

(Pre-Chorus)

(Chorus)

(Verse 3)
Amongst the shadows
the sleepers
the unholy ones

I see your laughter
your smile
everything I knew

But this illusion
breaks down
into reality

And there's no freedom
no conscious
no salvation

(Pre-chorus)

(Chorus X2)

Hit the floor
as you call me a piece of shit
I'm so worthless
I don't deserve the skin I'm in

I don't deserve the skin I'm in
Last edited by blubolt09 at Jun 8, 2010,
#2
every night I drift,
into the twilight state,
where there is, no escape,
and I'm scared. Scared
of bad dreams, and you!

Hope this helps.
jodyWayne
Last edited by jodyWayne at Jun 9, 2010,
#3
This is a good one. I didnt see anything that I would change.
For Fall asleep you could use go to bed?
...it was bright as the sun, but with ten times the heat