Here's an updated version of my second attempt at a song. I'm not sure how to classify it, but i guess it is a metal song with a little bit of a folk sound because of the acoustic guitars. Mostly i was just messing around on GP to make this and to experiment with time signatures. I posted a very incomplete older version of this a while ago and got one reply, which was useful. Since then it's changed almost beyond recognition. Just tell me what you like and what you think should be changed. I'm a total noob to songwriting so please take that into account.
Last edited by althebold711 at Jun 9, 2010,