#1
And as we both closed our eyes
We start to drift away.
We were saved by passing waves,
we are the lost at sea.
And as the water fills my lungs
These sea's choking the life out of me
As shock sets in
were side by side
we start to sink to the ground

And as we close our eyes
we start to see the light
it is the horizon
nothing but the sun shine rising

who are you,
to claim that
i am your prized possesion
i hear the sirens singing
I am who they sing to
its such a sorrowful song.
As the shock sets in
we stand side by side
we are ready to fight

And as we close our eyes
we start to see the light
this is what we fight for
another day alive,
and as we close our eyes
we start to see the light
it is the horizon
nothing but the sun shine rising


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Dammit, Snorlax! This is why we can't have nice things!!


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AWWWWWWWWW FUCK NAW!!!!!!!



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#2
pretty weak effort. very cliche metaphor and you mix up your tenses. too many unnecessary lines
#3
This would have been easier to read if you'd used consistent grammar, capitalization and punctuation.

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